I submitted a final paper for my business and technical writing class but I scored too low for passing. The instructor left me feedback on the paper and I need help fixing it so it can be passing. I have attached the assignment I submitted with the teachers comments on how to fix it. I have also attached the original assignment instructions she gave us.
According to Bem (1981), gender roles furnish the material for
According to Bem (1981), gender roles furnish the material for gender stereotypes. This is because when people associate a pattern of behavior with men or women, they tend to overlook individual variations and draw conclusions about the behavior associated with a particular gender. In the United States, sexism toward women